Comments for Cody AP Blog http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Wed, 14 Oct 2009 03:58:16 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on “War Dances” by hrobison http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/2009/10/13/war-dances/comment-page-1/#comment-8 hrobison Wed, 14 Oct 2009 03:58:16 +0000 http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/?p=105#comment-8 what gives you the sense that the narrator is "unhappy" throughout the whole story? is there a more specific adjective to describe his attitude? Eloquent observation in your closing lines...about those closest to you understanding, even if you hold some anger and frustration against them. How do symbols operate within this narrative? What does the cockroach represent? The blankets? what gives you the sense that the narrator is “unhappy” throughout the whole story? is there a more specific adjective to describe his attitude?

Eloquent observation in your closing lines…about those closest to you understanding, even if you hold some anger and frustration against them.

How do symbols operate within this narrative? What does the cockroach represent? The blankets?

]]> Comment on “The Lesson” by hrobison http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/2009/09/17/the-lesson/comment-page-1/#comment-6 hrobison Fri, 18 Sep 2009 18:16:42 +0000 http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/?p=77#comment-6 Great work picking up on the importance of the final sentence of the story...but how would you adjust your commentary on that quote after the close read we did in class yesterday? Great work picking up on the importance of the final sentence of the story…but how would you adjust your commentary on that quote after the close read we did in class yesterday?

]]> Comment on The Most Dangerous Game by hrobison http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/2009/09/10/the-most-dangerous-game/comment-page-1/#comment-5 hrobison Thu, 10 Sep 2009 13:40:39 +0000 http://cjmckenzie20.edublogs.org/?p=61#comment-5 effective summary...but what about the plot structure? effective summary…but what about the plot structure?

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