Cody AP Blog

There are a quite a few things I would do if I could rewrite my essay. One would be to create a thesis that has a theme involved in it. Right now there isn’t a clear theme making the essay unstable. Without a clear theme all my supporting paragraphs would have nothing to refer back too. Another thing I would do different would be making a plan before I start so that I have a clear structure and it will be organized. Clarity is a big thing that I would definitely want to change if I could rewrite the essay. Points were made in the essay but weren’t really expanded upon so that would be something to change. Theme is the biggest concern because when you don’t include one you can’t use concrete details to support your theme. Then as if mere details relate back to the thesis is enough you won’t get as an effective essay without including some sort of relation back to a theme, or universal idea. Structure, clarity, and a theme can all be easy fixes if you make a plan before writing. Making a plan is something I would do if i could rewrite in order to achieve a better score and provide a stronger essay.